Tuesday, 10 September 2013

Summarising and Paraphrasing Exercises


1.     “These new reactors would all operate at high temperatures, improving their efficiency. And they would include simplified safety features that do not rely on sophisticated backup systems or experienced operators – all are, in principle, ‘meltdown proof’ and can cool themselves down in the even of an accident with minimal, if any, human intervention…
      Expert agree that reactors will need to be a lot cheaper to run. And to sway a nuclear-averse public, the next generation of reactors will need to produce much less radioactive waste at terrorist-proof facilities.”
      
      My paraphrase
      Some expected general features of  the new nuclear reactors are : high temperature operation to improve productivity, easy safety operations, low-cost, less radio-active waste, can withstand terrorist attack, can do automatic emergency measures. (Butler, 2001)


2.     “In any one nation, there are both very wealthy and very poor individuals and families. When sociologists conduct research on these disparities, they frequently analyze secondary data that originally were collected by the World Bank and the United Nations. These data focus on quality-of-life indicators such as wealth; income; life expectancy; health; sanitation; the treatment of woman; and education for high-income, middle-income and low income nations.”
      Source: Kendall, D. (2004). Social problems in a diverse society (3rd ed.). Boston: Allyn & Bacon.
      
      My Summary
      There are poor and rich people everywhere in the world. Sociologists usually measure the difference between them with “quality-of-life indicators” data from the World Bank and the United Nations.
                                                                              

3.     Facebook can effectively affect/lower students’ grades as students tend to spend more time on Facebook rather than their schoolwork.

1 comment:

  1. Some expected general features of the new nuclear reactors include
    Your list below is not written in parallel structure which means the first word of each idea needs to be of the same form, Re-write it starting with -ing so that the first is 'operating at high temperatures to improve productivity.


    high temperature operation to improve productivity,
    easy safety operations,
    low-cost, less radio-active waste,
    can withstand terrorist attack,
    can do automatic emergency measures. (Butler, 2001)

    Also, which word comes between the penultimate and the final item of a list?




    2. “In any one nation, there are both very wealthy and very poor individuals and families. When sociologists conduct research on these disparities, they frequently analyze secondary data that originally were collected by the World Bank and the United Nations. These data focus on quality-of-life indicators such as wealth; income; life expectancy; health; sanitation; the treatment of woman; and education for high-income, middle-income and low income nations.”
    Source: Kendall, D. (2004). Social problems in a diverse society (3rd ed.). Boston: Allyn & Bacon.

    My Summary
    There are poor and rich people everywhere in the world. Sociologists usually measure the difference between them with “quality-of-life indicators” data from the World Bank and the United Nations.


    3. Facebook can effectively affect/lower students’ grades as students tend to spend more time on Facebook rather than their schoolwork.

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